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Job Satisfaction

by shakeberry @ 2008-07-02 - 15:17:43

The rain was falling down hard, the bus stop was cramped...looking at my watch I realised I would be late, "Damn!" I thought, as I clutched the black leather briefcase to my chest...remembering lightly running my fingers over the contents, feeling the smoothness, the contours and watching it glisten in the new daylight...That was the perk to my new found life and job.

Finally the number 48 is here, we all jostled to get on, the rowdy schoolkids were on again, I find a seat and tap my briefcase, smirking to myself, and contemplating using the contents on the little shits. The world around me is busy and loud, yet I feel a sense of calmness, like a sunset on the beach..this always happens when I'm focused on the task ahead. A timid girl comes and sits next to me, she smiles and it's the smile I've seen before, the one where you keep your head down, don't make eye contact, in hopes no one notices you...but the problem is certain people do...those are the ones my job deals with.
 

The bell rings and the girl gets up, instinctively knowing I have to get passed. The rain is beating down hard, as I step off, I look and see I'm back in the place I've been before. My job mostly entails nightwork, but this job was a special case, it couldn't be done any other time. I walk up to the familiar pathway, and walk around to the backdoor, I feel under the plantpot, ahh i think to myself, there as always. I quietly unlock the door, my breathing heavier, although still controlled. I remember where all the creaks where, but there's no sound he will hear.

Except the one of my gun.


 
 

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lledeblledeb [Member]
2008-07-02 @ 15:21

I like it. Good.

shakeberryshakeberry [Member]
2008-07-02 @ 15:22

I write it last night, but then you inspired me to post it here :) Thank you

lledeblledeb [Member]
2008-07-02 @ 15:30

As i just commented on your blog page, you should post the whole thing.

Nice scene-setting, I enjoyed that.

shakeberryshakeberry [Member]
2008-07-02 @ 15:23

Thank you :) I did a big version, but only saw this this morning, kind of weird how it worked out.

LandersUKLandersUK pro
2008-07-02 @ 15:25

I like it!

lyndljlyndlj pro
2008-07-03 @ 08:19

Like it, love the buid up, leave em wanting more, perfick :)

boredrichboredrich [Member]
2008-07-03 @ 09:42

blummin excellent love it

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